Saturday, May 22, 2010

alisonism #2: "Pause as necessary."

When people are reading poetry out loud, I don't like it when they read like this:

"And there sat Sam.
looking cool and calm.
in the heart of the furnace roar.
And he wore a smile.
you could see a mile.
and he said.
"Please close that door.
It's fine in here.
but I greatly fear.
you'll let in the cold and storm.
Since I left Plumtree.
down in Tennessee.
it's the first time I've been warm."

Because poems should be read like this:

"And there sat Sam, looking cool and calm, in the heart of the furnace roar, and he wore a smile you could see a mile, and he said, "Please close that door.  It's fine in here, but I greatly fear you'll let in the cold and storm. Since I left Plumtree, down in Tennessee, it's the first time I've been warm."

And in celebration of good poems, I leave you with this one, the one I just quoted, that I know because of my grandpa and his brother. :)  (It's long but worth it, people.  If you haven't read it, you should.)

The Cremation of Sam McGee
by Robert Service

There are strange things done in the midnight sun
By the men who moil for gold;
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
That would make your blood run cold;
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
But the queerest they ever did see
Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
I cremated Sam McGee.

Now Sam McGee was from Tennessee,
where the cotton blooms and blows.
Why he left his home in the South to roam
'round the Pole, God only knows.
He was always cold but the land of gold
seemed to hold him like a spell;
Though he'd often say in his homely way
that he'd sooner live in hell.

On a Christmas Day we were mushing our way
over the Dawson trail.
Talk of your cold! Through the parka's fold,
it stabbed like a driven nail.
If our eyes we'd close, then the lashes froze
till sometimes we couldn't see.
It wasn't much fun, but the only one
to whimper was Sam McGee.

And that very night, as we lay packed tight
in our robes beneath the snow,
And the dogs were fed, and the stars o'erhead
were dancing heel and toe,
He turned to me and "Cap," says he,
"I'll cash in this trip, I guess;
And if I do, I'm asking that you 
won't refuse my last request."

Well, he seemed so low that I couldn't say no; 
then he says with a sort of moan,
"It's the cursed cold, and it's got right hold
till I'm chilled clean through to thte bone.
Yet taint being dead - it's my awful dread
of the ice grave that pains;
So I want you to swear that, foul or fair,
you'll cremate my last remains.

A pal's last need is a thing to heed,
so I swore I would not fail;
And we started on at the streak of dawn
but Oh! he looked ghastly pale.
He crouched on the sleigh, and he raved all day
of his home in Tennessee;
And before nightfall a corpse was all
that was left of Sam McGee.

There wasn't a breath in that land of death,
and I hurried, horror-driven,
with a corpse half-hid that I couldn't get rid
because of a promise given.
It was lashed to the sleigh, and it seemed to say,
"You may tax your brawn and brains,
But you promised true, and it's up to you
to cremate these last remains."

Now a promise made is a debt unpaid,
and the trail has its own stern code.
In the days to come, though my lips were dumb,
in my heart, how I cursed that load!
In the long, long night, by the lone firelight,
while the huskies, round in a ring,
howled out their woes to the homeless snows - 
Oh, how I loathed the thing!

And every day that quiet clay
seemed to heavy and heavier grow;
And on I went, though the dogs were spent
and the grub was getting low.
The trail was bad, and I felt half mad,
but I swore I would not give in; 
And I'd often sing to the hateful thing,
and it hearkened with a grin.

Till I came to the marge of Lake Lebarge,
and a derelict there lay;
It was jammed in the ice, but I saw in a trice
it was called the Alice May.
And I looked at it, and I thought a bit,
and I looked at my frozen chum.
Then, "Here," said I, with a sudden cry, "is my crematorium!"

Some planks I tore from the cabin floor
and I lit the boiler fire;
Some coal I found that was lying around,
and I heaped the fuel higher;
The flames just soared, and the furnace roared
such a blaze you seldom see.
And I burrowed a hole in the glowing coal
and I stuffed in Sam McGee.

Then I made a hike, for I didn't like
to hear him sizzle so.
And the heavens scowled, and the huskies howled,
and the wind began to blow.
It was icy cold, but the hot sweat rolled
down my cheeks, and I don't know why;
And the greasy smoke in an inky cloak
went streaking down the sky.

I do not now how long in the snow
I wrestled with grisly fear,
but the stars came out and they danced about 
ere again I ventured near.
I was sick with dead, but I bravely said,
"I'll just take a peep inside.
I guess he's cooked, and it's time I looked."
Then the door I opened wide.

And there sat Sam, looking cool and calm,
in the heart of the furnace roar;
And he wore a smile you could see a mile,
and he said, "Please close that door.
It's fine in here, but I greatly fear
you'll let in the cold and storm - 
Since I left Plumtree, down in Tennessee,
it's the first time I've been warm."

There are strange things done in the midnight sun
by the men who moil for gold.
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
that would make your blood run cold.
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
but the queerest they ever did see
was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
I cremated Sam McGee.

3 comments:

NV Gardener said...

Ali...
This is one of my favorite poems and one that I memorized a long time ago. A couple of other favorites (again, memorized) are The Road Not Taken (Robert Frost) and The Charge of the Light Brigade (Tenneson).

Have you ever read any other Robert Service poems? The Shooting of Dan McGrew or The Ballad of Gum-Boot Ben? You should look at www.robertwservice.com. You'll find all sorts of great poems that he wrote.

Love,
Stefan

Unknown said...

Amen! I hate it when people rad them like robots, and don't blend the lines together. Agh.

Alison said...

Stefan,
I know; I love this one! I remember Brooke trying to memorize it once, but I can't remember if she finished. I think it'd be fun to have it memorized, though. It's such a fun poem :) I've enver read any of the other Robert Service poems (or, I don't think, The Charge of the LIght Brigade). I will have to check out that website! I'll let you know which is my favorite that I find :D

Love you!
Alison

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